How could You

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by gummybear16 (Account disabled) on Sunday, 03-Jul-2005 16:42:46

Hey guys,
Here's a poem I wrote when I was upset and depressed.
I was in School supposed to be working on a research paper at the time,
so...
Here goes...

How could lead me astray? How could you say I was the light that lighted your way? How could you say I was that sining star that sparkled? How could you
let me believe I was sheltered in your love? How could you let me believe I was your heavin from above? I believed you, and yet I loved you with all my
heart. But of course you had the mind to shatter it into peaces. So now I lay. Here today. Im sitting on my bored in distressed ass. When Im supposed to
be in class. Im doin a research paper, So now I rest my poor head. And hope you’re blessed with something other than my dear calm peaceful thoughts which
are no more.But yet I’m writing a paper on you and your lies.

Post 2 by Inesle1987 (Account disabled) on Sunday, 03-Jul-2005 16:45:40

Hey I really like it, I really feel that it's coming from your heart. Great.
*big hugs*
Ines.

Post 3 by gummybear16 (Account disabled) on Sunday, 03-Jul-2005 16:50:09

lol thank you ines *big hug back*

Post 4 by chelslicious (like it or not, I'm gonna say what I mean. all the time.) on Sunday, 03-Jul-2005 17:39:46

great job karri!

Post 5 by God's Child (Generic Zoner) on Sunday, 03-Jul-2005 20:49:44

Disturbing, how disturbing.

Post 6 by gummybear16 (Account disabled) on Sunday, 03-Jul-2005 21:09:28

ya gotta understand, that was in um May when I wrote that? lol

Post 7 by asdfghjkl (Account disabled) on Sunday, 03-Jul-2005 22:22:07

I love it, Karrie. I feel that way sometimes too. Not a good feeling.

Post 8 by Inesle1987 (Account disabled) on Tuesday, 05-Jul-2005 3:33:18

WHy disturbing, Darrel? Why do you think it's disturbing? I like it.

Post 9 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Wednesday, 06-Jul-2005 10:34:58

Maybe because of the barely disguised anger. I can almost see 2 people 1 asking how? and the other unsure of ow to respond...it's very expressive and well written.

Post 10 by Inesle1987 (Account disabled) on Wednesday, 06-Jul-2005 10:50:30

I totally agree.